Monday, March 17, 2008

The god that failed


A wretched ruler, he stands by the wall
playing the one with his ping pong ball
an ether of uncertainty, it prevails
he was the god, that failed

Indicted awaiting the habeas of corpus
he walks by the gloom, a passage through vein
pictures of forgotten, memories of anonymous
Jack and Iris are ones that ordain

An Iris within she speaks to him
"different were you and yet the same
you walked by glory and spelled an honour
where is the one that made you in valour?"

He reaches for Iris and Jack bellows
"You are the lost one and now no more
of times and their purples you followed and erred
what is it you oft now mutter?"

Of the minions he cried aloud
"detested souls you need not laud
i am the one you chose to bow
sad it be true, as i so lay here indevout"

To Jack and Iris he denounced
"ordinary you made me you made me god
you gave me freedom to do not what
you failed me once and failed once more
alas you failed in failing thou"

"I pass my distress as unto thy
i let them be as without my
i decry my freedom as now no more
i shall walk and walk like god never before"

An Iris she flows she does with caress
the Jack downtrodden, oppressed and backlashed
smooth is she, he lies travailed
together they whisper with history betrayed
"you are the one and the god that failed"

10 comments:

Unknown said...

what is this blaming game?
and why so gloomy so early in life?
your pauses are also misleading. or maybe i read it wrong.
i am no expert but you are good.
escentric but good with language.

Unknown said...

hehe!! this is the 1st time some1's commented on my blog so fast! Thnx a lot for r comments! And like Vaibhav says...i need to put up an explanation everytime i write a blog! I am not as gloomy as you say!! And esp. not when am able to come up such stuff!! Hehe!!

Vaibhav Bansal said...

he bhagwan kin do logon ko milwa diya maine!!!
aur pappu l*** saale maine bahut pehle ek comment kiya tha

rahul vaish said...

Marvelous, though I couldn't understand much. Pups, your level is too high for people like me, but keep sending me such posts, I enjoy reading them.

vaish

Aashish Bhatnagar said...

Braavooo PP. good one. m impressed. though i had to read it twice to understand the scenario but its nice. out of box.

Prats said...

Nice stuff dude!!
But i soo wish i cld read it ever!!!

Prats said...

i so like the look of ur blog page.. :D

Anon said...

you make up for the lack of colours on your orkut display pic quite nicely here! really nice! :D

Winnie the poohi said...

hey good one!

Am gonna visit for more!

Unknown said...

I really couldn't make much sense out of it :O .......... but your choice of words is admirable! Liked it!